Recently, a colleague sent me a link to George Orwell's essay,
"Politics and the English Language." (One version can be found at
http://xahlee.org/p/george_orwell_english.html.)
In it, Orwell, author of both "1984" and "Animal Farm," takes aim
against what he calls "the decline of language." He provides many
examples.
The essay was published in 1946. But its insights remain fresh.
For instance, he writes, "In our time it is broadly true that
political writing is bad writing." Few who endured the recent
election season would argue with that one.
He continued, "Where it is not true, it will generally be found
that the writer is some kind of rebel, expressing his private
opinions and not a 'party line.' Orthodoxy, of whatever color,
seems to demand a lifeless, imitative style."
That's true, too. In print, as in conversation, when people
start repeating themselves, it's because they have run out of
anything new to say. They invest the cliché and its repetition with
a belief in its wisdom. Such clichés are comforting to some, like
the choral response of a prayer.
Under the section, "Meaningless Words," he writes, "The word
Fascism has now no meaning except insofar as it signifies
'something not desirable.'" Substitute "socialism" for "fascism,"
and it could be 2010.
Don't believe me? Next time somebody uses the term around you,
ask him or her to define it. Then ask if professional fire
departments fit the definition, and if that's a good thing or a bad
thing.
Orwell also quotes from my favorite Old Testament book,
Ecclesiastes. "I returned and saw under the sun, that the race is
not to the swift, nor the battle to the strong, neither yet bread
to the wise, nor yet riches to men of understanding, nor yet favor
to men of skill; but time and chance happeneth to them all." Such
strong, clear, wonderful writing!
Then he translates it into what passed for educated prose in
1946. "Objective consideration of contemporary phenomena compels
the conclusion that success or failure in competitive activities
exhibits no tendency to be commensurate with innate capacity, but
that a considerable element of the unpredictable must invariably be
taken into account."
That reminds me of my favorite sentence, whose mellifluous
rhythms so enchanted me as a child that I memorized it: "Crest has
been shown to be an effective decay preventive dentifrice that can
be of significant value when used in a conscientiously applied
program of oral hygiene and regular professional care." Or as my
mother put it, "brush your teeth and go to the dentist every six
months, or your teeth will fall out."
It's fun to find bad examples of language. But Orwell offered
some positive suggestions, too.
(i) Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which
you are used to seeing in print.
(ii) Never use a long word where a short one will do.
(iii) If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it
out.
(iv) Never use the passive where you can use the active.
(v) Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon
word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
(vi) Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright
barbarous.
It's not bad advice … for a socialist.
Jamie LaRue is director of Douglas County Libraries. LaRue's
Views are his own.